Ketsu [Jutsu]

Subject: Ketsu [Jutsu] Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:08 am

KNOWLEDGE MASTERY

NINJUTSU

Lv1:

Lv2:

Lv3:

Gets Hand Seal Movement Lvl 1 effects.

GENJUTSU

Lv1:

Gets Genjutsu Resistance Lvl 1 effects.

Lv2:

Gets Genjutsu Resistance Lvl 2 effects.

Lv3:

Gets Genjutsu Resistance Lvl 3 effects.

TAIJUTSU

Lv1:

Lv2:

Lv3:

Gets Speed and Agility or Strength and Stamina Lvl 1 effects.

SKILL MASTERY

GENJUTSU RESISTANCE

Lv1: Allows the ninja to sense if a Genjutsu is placed against them one rank lower. Allows the ninja to use Chakra Kai.
Lv2: Allows the ninja to sense if a Genjutsu is placed against them of the same rank or lower. Allows the ninja to the use of Genjutsu Kai, and now able to release an ally from Genjutsu.
Lv3: Allows the ninja to sense if a Genjutsu is placed against them of up to one rank higher than their rank. Allows the ninja to the use of Chou Genjutsu Kai.

HAND SEAL MOVEMENT

Lv1: The Shinobi's level of speed with their hand seals is now alot quicker than an average Shinobi, allowing the Shinobi to utilize their jutsu in half the normal time it usually would to execute.

KEKKEI GENKAI MASTERY

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STRENGTH AND POWER

Lv1: The ninja's physical power increases beyond an average ninja. Can endure more pain and last longer in battle.

Lv2:

SPEED AND AGILITY

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Lv2:

Lv3:

CHAKRA CAPACITY

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WEAPONRY

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Expert:

CLAN TECHNIQUES

2nd Tomoe Sharingan
Type: Doujutsu
Sub Type: Sharingan
Rank: B
Chakra: 7[+1/post]
This new Tomoe Sharingan will allow the ninja to pierce through Visual Genjutsu (Up to the Copying Wheel rank) and see the surrounding reality for what it really is. Also the Sharingan holder now has the ability to pierce another’s body and see their chakra flow. While the eye is not refined enough to see the tenketsu and chakra circulatory system like the Byakugan, it can view the movement and flow of chakra. This can help them tell if a person is trapped in a Genjutsu, or if an attacker is a real threat or merely a bunshin (These two abilities above becomes passive when elevated to the 3rd Tomoe Sharingan). This new eye can now also can read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu, learning how the skill is done up to C rank, this is done by the Piercing Eye to view a technique being performed and almost instantly memorize the movements required to be able to complete it, including the needed chakra moldings and seals used. Costs 1 chakra to maintain per post.

Copying Wheel
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Sharingan
Rank: C
Chakra: 7
This jutsu allows the user to make minor copying of Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and even Genjutsu from the enemy if they perform it in combat. However, they can only copy jutsus up to C rank. If the user doesn't have the physical skill nor a contract to perform the jutsu the jutsu cannot be used. Also with this jutsu the Sharingan user can copy any form of movements and handwriting, minor lip movement, etc. (If this jutsu is used this way it's jutsu cost is nothing). Note, this jutsu can only be used four times a year (once a month in RPG Forum Rules) and it's jutsu cost is passive. Cannot copy KG/Clan Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, or Genjutsu.

RAITON NINJUTSU

Raikyuu no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Raiton
Rank: D
Chakra: 3
The user expels lighting-like chakra from their hands in the form of a ball and can be used to throw at their target. If hit with this jutsu the target becomes paralyze for only for 1 post.

Raiton no Hiraishin
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Raiton
Rank: C
Chakra: 5
After the user comes into physical contact with their opponent, the user will generate lightening chakra from their body. The user will then release a bolt of electricity which will travel through their body into the body of their opponent causing the target numbness.

Raiton Zakeru
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Raiton
Rank: C
Chakra: 6
The user generates lightning chakra from their body and then expels a powerful lightning bolt from their mouth, strong enough to blast through concrete.

Raiton Zakeruga
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Raiton
Rank: B
Chakra: 9
This jutsu is the evolution of Zakeru. The ninja will generate a large amount of lightning chakra and release it in a bolt of lightning. However, unlike Zakeru the bolt will be more concentrated so it moves faster and causes greater damage, though it effects a smaller range. Requires Raiton Zakeru .

Raiton Rashirudo
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Raiton
Rank: B
Chakra: 10
The ninja will spit out a large amount of lightning from their mouth that will form a wall that will act as a barrier for incoming attacks, and can also paralyze targets caught within its barrier.

Raiuu Mouko
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Raiton
Rank: B
Chakra: 11
After gathering a large amount of lightning chakra in their hand, the user will create a large wolf made of lightning to attack their target. The lightning will run from the user's hand to the wolf itself like a leash, limiting its range (10 meters) and grant the user control of the wolf.

Raiton Baou Zakeruga
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Raiton
Rank: A
Chakra: 14
This jutsu causes a very large bolt of lightning in the form of a dragon, that is generated from the user's mouth. The size of the jutsu allows it to take out several opponents at once. This jutsu can break most defensive barriers and can also momentarily paralyze any one hit.

Raiton Enchou Suirou no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Raiton
Rank: A
Chakra: 16
The user will generate lightening chakra from their body unto the ground, traveling to their target moving at an alarming rate. Once the lightening current reaches the target it will envelop the target and capture them within a dome-like prison made of lightening chakra. If anything comes in contact with the dome it will instantly be shocked causing complete numbness throughout the nervous system.

Chidori
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Raiton
Rank: A
Chakra: 14 [or 9]
It was said that this technique was created by one of the earliest shinobi in Konohagure way before any Great Shinobi Wars now used by others. The ninja focuses their lightning chakra to their hand, thus their hand becoming enveloped by an electrical force. The user can alter the shape of the force, similar to an electrical discharge, they can decide the power and range of the attack. After concentrating the chakra into their palm, the ninja will then focus their chakra on impact of the palm thus the chakra will become visible. The ninja will utilizing their speed and focus, and by using the great force of chakra from the thrust to pierce through any object by extending their forearm. Because their opponent can easily counter the attack, it requires a Sharingan user or any other jutsu to make the technique worthwhile. Due to the ninja's high speed, the force emits a sound like a thousand birds chirping which gave the technique its name. It's a weapon of choice for assassinations due to its purpose. However if the foe surivives the attack the force of raiton based chakra will momentarily pararlyze the target cause numbness, as it will greatly damage the victim's nervous system. The user can alter the size of the jutsu allowing it to due minor damage, however if this method is being used it's has the potential of severing through an object like before but not as effiecent as before (This jutsu cost is B rank if the user decrease the size for minor damage). Because of the great amount of chakra needed to utilize the technique, the technique can only be used so many times daily due to the strain it puts on the user's palm. If the user is below the rank of Jounin the ninja can only use this jutsu twice per battle (If the user weakens the Chidori can be used four times instead of two). Requires Speed & Agility Level 3.

KATON NINJUTSU

Katon Goukakyuu no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Katon
Rank: C
Chakra: 6
A jutsu first used by the Uchiha Clan now used by many other ninjas. The ninja draws chakra from the mouth and then it enters their chest and then immediately exhales it. By putting the hand to the mouth the ninja blows out a stream of fire which erupts into a large ball of flames.

Katon Kibaku Goukakyuu no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Katon
Rank: B
Chakra: 9
This jutsu is the evolution of Katon Goukakyuu no Jutsu. This jutsu is exactly the same as Katon Goukakyuu no Jutsu except that it has a longer range and generates a larger ball of flames however, once it erupts into a ball of flames it will explode causing severe damage.

Katon Karyuu Endan
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Katon
Rank: B
Chakra: 10 [1/post]
This jutsu is simply a powerful long-range flamethrower. First, the user will gather chakra into their chest and then proceed to blow a large jet of flames from their mouth stretching up to 25 meters and can maintain it for a large amount of time. Mandatory 10 chakra cost. Cost 1 chakra to maintain per post.

Katon Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Katon
Rank: B
Chakra: 12
The ninja blows a large amount of combustible mist at the enemy. Once the mist makes contact with a flame, it will ignite in an explosion of flames, with the same properties as the flame that ignited it.

Katon Haisekishou
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Katon
Rank: B
Chakra: 12
The ninja will expel a cloud of ash from their mouth. The cloud begins to cover the area and when the ninja clicks their teeth the cloud will ignite in an explosion.

TAIJUTSU

Sumiyaka Karakuri

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Senkou Sentou

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Senkou Kikku

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Sanhyaku Rokujuu Kagen Atakku

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Houashi Dageki

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Hou Shou

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Atsu Shou

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STATISTICS

KNOWLEDGE POINTS 18[18]
SKILL POINTS 28[26]
CHAKRA POINTS 102
JUTSU POINTS 415[415]

Subject: Re: Ketsu [Jutsu] Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:24 pm

As their is currently no Jutsu mod I will evaluate this.

First, though you are part of the Uchiha Clan the Clan has a Kekkei Genkai. Thus, you must obtain the Kekkei Genkai Mastery skill. Clan Mastery is for Akimichi, Aburame or clans that do not posses a KG.

Second, you have spent 29 points though ANBUs have 28 SMP. Also Hand Seal Movement Lvl 1 effects for free with your Ninjutsu Knowledge. (Please indicate what is free and what you are spending points on)

Third, Katon Karyuu Endan cost is 10 not 12 though I must congratulate you on how you are not like so many who make their chakra cost the lowest (though you may drop some other jutsu costs). Also, it has a maintaining cost.

You are 20 points over in JP and your jutsu count is off.

After corrections I may approve.

Subject: Re: Ketsu [Jutsu] Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:46 pm

Think that's about everything.

Anything with an italicized description [skills] is a free skill due to the knowledge distribution.

<3

Subject: Re: Ketsu [Jutsu] Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:00 am

Still spent too much points and the Hand Seal Movement lvl 1 is only free.

You spent 6 SMP on KG Mastery
2 SMP on Strength and Stamina
6 SMP on Speed Agility
6 SMP on Capacity
9 SMP on Weaponry

that combined equals 29 points, you only receive 28 points.

Note, Lvl 3 Tai gives you a free level 1 Speed and Agility OR a free level 1 Strength and Stamina

Subject: Re: Ketsu [Jutsu] Sun Nov 21, 2010 1:05 am

Alright, I know what I did wrong.

When I took out the third level of Strength for the third level of Kekkei Genkai, my mind didn't comprehend that right. I took it as "Oh hey, I have 2 points left over, let's put them into something else!" and when I did, well. You see where that went.

Edits made. [ish]

Subject: Re: Ketsu [Jutsu] Sun Nov 21, 2010 9:27 pm

You still spent to much SMP (29) and Sumiyaka Karakuri is a D-Rank and D-Rank minimum cost is 3 chakra not 2.

Subject: Re: Ketsu [Jutsu] Sun Nov 21, 2010 9:29 pm

Irritating.

Subject: Re: Ketsu [Jutsu] Sun Nov 21, 2010 9:42 pm

Not my fault.

approved

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